[jaycollister]

Thank you Gillian! Your advice is greatly appreciated.

[jaycollister]

Hello guys,

Sorry this may be a silly question, I’ve finished writing the RAP for next submission and having some difficulties with my mentor’s feedback. She is happy with the content in all three parts but it’s the layout that she’s suggesting that I amend. I just wanted to get a second opinion.

The first disagreement we have is how to introduce the issues at Carillion and corporate governance. In part 1 of my RAP I’ve introduced some of the key issues briefly that occurred to ‘set the scene’. I’ve then gone on to give a brief intro into how corporate governance has developed since Cadbury. She has said that I should introduce corporate governance in part 2 when I introduce the Corporate Governance Code as my business/accounting model and introduce the issues in my part 3 before the analysis.

Second is my project title. I believe from reading the information pack is that the title should follow the topic picked and have the chosen company adapted into the title ie ‘A critical evaluation of Carillion Plc’s corporate governance practices including an assessment of the origins of the corporate governance issues and the organisation’s response’ however my Mentor has said this in not the case. She has suggested a title along the lines of ‘An evaluation of the corporate governance issues at Carillion Plc that led to the liquidation of the company’.

I’m probably overthinking but I just want to get a first time pass before I fall back into the pressure of my final exams!!!

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